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shadowess ([info]shadowess) wrote,
@ 2009-11-01 21:45:00

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Current mood: cheerful
Entry tags:ficlets, wrisomifu

WriSoMiFu - Day 1
Title: Pain
Author: [info]shadowess
Word Count: 151
Rating(s): PG
Challenge: Addiction/Drug Use
Warning(s):Summary:</b> Both Harry and Severus are in pain, but for different reasons.
A/N: Written for WriSoMiFu and My Table of Warnings/Prompts can be found Here

Harry slowly let himself into the room and came to stand at the end of the couch. On the couch asleep, surrounded by empty potion bottles, lay Snape.

Harry frowned and started to collect the bottles carrying them to the sink. He stood at the sink and carefully rinsed out the vials, setting them to the side once they were cleaned.

Standing at the sink, Harry chocked down a sob, Severus’ potion use was only getting worse as the days went by. Whenever Harry mentioned his concern Severus would just say that it was lingering pain from Nagini’s bite and surely Harry didn’t want him to be in pain. Harry would smile, but as the days passed Severus became more and more dependent on the pain potions.

Harry hurriedly dashed away his tears as he heard Severus stirring from the couch.

“Harry could you bring me another pain potion?”

“Yes Severus.”



Title: Hesitate
Author: [info]shadowess
Word Count: 381
Rating(s): NC-17
Challenge: Ambiguous Consent
Warning(s): Ambiguous Consent, Harry is 16
Summary: “You don’t want to enter the thick of the war without ever knowing love do you Harry?”
A/N: Written for WriSoMiFu and My Table of Warnings/Prompts can be found Here

After the kiss, Harry’s heart was fluttering and the tempo only increased when Severus lead him into his bedroom. Harry paused at the door, things were moving just too fast. He knew he had feeling for Severus, he just wasn’t sure he wanted to move so fast.

Severus tugged him to join him on the bed. He made quick work of Harry’s shirt and as his hands moved to Harry’s belt Harry pushed his hands away.

“Wait, Severus, I don’t know, this is just happening so fast.” Severus took Harry’s hands and brought them to his mouth and kissed them.

“Harry, we’re in a war, we don’t know when, or if, we will get another moment like this.” Harry’s posture softened and he leaned forward to kiss Severus again.

He broke away, breathless,

“Severus I know, it’s just, I’m-” Severus started to nuzzle down Harry’s neck and slowly lowered Harry down to the bed.

“Are you a virgin Harry?” A blush crept up Harry’s neck and he nodded shyly. “You don’t want to enter the thick of the war without ever knowing love do you Harry?”

Severus’ hand stole down to dip under Harry’s belt.

Harry gasped, “No, but-” Severus silenced him with a kiss and unlatched the belt, then the button and zipper. Severus slowly slid Harry’s trousers and pants down and off of him.

A wicked smile lit on Severus’ face as he looked his fill. Harry brought his legs up and covered himself with his hands. Severus gently moved Harry’s hands away and then slowly gripped one of Harry’s ankles and pulled his leg down and placed it around his waist. One of Severus’ hands held Harry’s leg around his waist; the other stroked up the other thigh and parted Harry’s legs further.

Harry squirmed under him, “Severus, I don’t think-”

“Shh, Harry, this will feel good, trust me.” Severus undid his fly and released his aching manhood. He reached under the pillow and pulled out a jar of lubrication. He slowly prepared Harry, one finger at a time as Harry moaned and shifted under him.

Severus lined up his cock and gently sunk into Harry.

He thrust into Harry and as he approached orgasm he thought that Harry didn’t put up as much fight as most students.


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[info]torino10154
2009-11-02 03:02 am UTC (link)
The first one is sad-poor boys, both of them. The last line is killer in the second. Damn. Great job.

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-02 03:12 am UTC (link)
thanks for the comment! I really like the last line of the second one, I actually started that one with the thought of it being not too dark or sinister, but that last line just happened. thanks!!

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-11-02 02:18 pm UTC (link)
Killer line! *points with finger* That totally tears my monogamous snarry-loving heart to tatters... and it's great! (Yes, I am that crazy...)
The persuasion is brilliantly done; Harry is so easily influenced and Severus does have good arguments... but he's also evil. *cries*
Love the first one, too; it's so sad, but also very possible. ;_; Poor boys... I just hope Severus realizes he's addicted and that they can work it out!

Is it okay if I friend you? I would love to see the rest of the things you write this month.

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-02 09:06 pm UTC (link)
friend away, I'm always happy to have new friends.

that killer line just happened, honestly I didn't even notice it happening until it did. So pleased you enjoyed them

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[info]mac_tunes
2009-11-02 02:21 pm UTC (link)
hwt! er.. sorry, this is fantastic that I don't know what is that first word I typed. :p came here via [info]torino10154's post.

first part - pain described in two ways, the body and the heart. Aw~ very nicely done. Love it!

2nd part... wah!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ *speechless* [info]torino10154 said it all!

p.s. I hope you don't know if I add your journal to keep track? These are very tasty bits. :p

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[info]mac_tunes
2009-11-02 02:22 pm UTC (link)
I mean I hope you don't mind, .... mind's surely gone... :p must remind myself, don't read and type comments at the same time...

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-02 09:08 pm UTC (link)
thank you thank you for the comments. Friend away, it's always lovely to get new friends. =)

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-02 02:42 pm UTC (link)
Both of them very sad, I think. I'm intrigued by your intention to work your way through the warnings. What a great idea! Good luck!

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-02 09:10 pm UTC (link)
I'm a little concerned about a few of them as some a squicks *refers to list* er well maybe 4-5 of them (wonder if you can guess which ones ^_^)
But I'm very much looking forward to getting through them all

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-02 04:37 pm UTC (link)
Wow!
These are both very sad and ouchy but quite well done.
What an interesting premise, to work your way through the WTP warnings.
You go, girl!

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-02 09:11 pm UTC (link)
thank you! I hope that I can maybe make some of them not so ouchy, but looking at most of the warnings that might be difficult, but I'm very excited to see this through

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[info]accioslash
2009-11-02 11:11 pm UTC (link)
he thought that Harry didn’t put up as much fight as most students.

Oh, wow. I liked both of them, but I have such a kink for predator!Snape.

And this is such a wonderful idea! It's fantastic that someone is both writing and has a finished product to share each day. Great job!

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-02 11:14 pm UTC (link)
OMG I share you kink like whoa. Predator!snape is HOT, and wrong, but HOT
I've posted Day 2 just now. I might get another one done tonight.

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[info]accioslash
2009-11-03 08:15 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Good for you. I don't know how people do it. I'm just writing teeny entries and it takes me all day. I can't even keep up with my flist. *sigh* I'll get to everyone soon. I guess it just means I have more to look forward to! ;D

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[info]theantipam
2009-11-05 09:53 pm UTC (link)
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Oops, I think I scared the cat. That is always a good sign! :)

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-06 08:26 am UTC (link)
lol Thanks!

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[info]entrenous88
2009-11-07 12:43 am UTC (link)
*sobs* Poor shy virgin Harry! *cuddles him*

Um, you've caught me on a fluffy night. :D Liked that second one a great deal.

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-08 08:01 am UTC (link)
yes I think Harry will need some extra lovin' now.

*lol* a fluffy night ^_^ Thanks for the comment!

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[info]countesszero
2009-11-16 11:52 am UTC (link)
uh! i love drugaddict!snape.

nice!

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[info]shadowess
2009-12-13 04:08 am UTC (link)
thanks, glad you liked it

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[info]pegotha
2009-11-16 08:57 pm UTC (link)
HaHA! God that second one is genius! I'd happily be one of his "students" ;) I love a slimy Snape. and if that's weird...sue me :D

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[info]shadowess
2009-12-13 04:09 am UTC (link)
Oh I agree, I like a morally ambiguous Snape, so you're not alone ^_^

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